fixing a legendary story

Hi fantastic reader's,

 We are learning to fix surface features. Surface features our little bits in your writing. 

We had to fix our writing if too many words that wear the same.We also had to fix full stops and capital letters. Surface features are punctuation,repeated words,spelling.we need to use surface features and makes our writing easier for people other to read.This is a sentence without surface features thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed the sentence does not have punctuation,repeated words,spelling.

On our room nine site our  teacher put a link to a story and we had to fix it.We made a copy of it for our own story and read it once and put in full stop at the end of the sentence.

Next we had to read it again we highlight the most repeated words we had to and fix the most repeated words.

 We had to read the third time it sound easier but we had to figure out what sentences started the same way.

This is what it looks like before we put in surface features.can you notice what is wrong.

This is what it looks like now.can you spot what I changed.

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word of the week

 Hi readers I haven't done one of the blog posts in ages cos I  haven't been doing the word of the week in ages.

The word of the week something we do every week we were able to choose our own word for the word of the term.

Here is what I did

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Fiafia

 Hello Reader's,

I am talling you about a fiafia. 

A fiafia is a Pacifica thing that we do here at school.

So a fiafia is a performance of Samoan and Tongan dancing, haka,drums and singing.Well we were practicing for weeks. It was supposed to be at the highschool but it got cancelled because of covid. I felt nerrons. I felt like I was going to mess up because i was the lead drummer.

  Here is a video.

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