I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Xavier, Grumpy the dwarf is the perfect example of someone who is cantankerous. The definition you have used is quite complicated. if you could shorten it in your own words what would it be?
Kia ora Xavier. I like the idea of using Grumpy.He's a great example of cantankerous. What reason do you think Grumpy has to be this way?. I did find it a bit hard to read the pink text on the red background. Maybe you could make the illustration smaller so that the text is on a blank section.
Hi Xavier,
ReplyDeleteGrumpy the dwarf is the perfect example of someone who is cantankerous. The definition you have used is quite complicated. if you could shorten it in your own words what would it be?
Kia ora Xavier.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of using Grumpy.He's a great example of cantankerous.
What reason do you think Grumpy has to be this way?.
I did find it a bit hard to read the pink text on the red background.
Maybe you could make the illustration smaller so that the text is on a blank section.