We are learning to make a strong narrative. It has to be believable consistent and descriptive and strong structure.
Yesterday,we were learning how to show not tell .We had to go on this app thesaurus and search up The week action words. And then it came out with the strong action words.
this is the sentence we changed.
Al gave Miss D coffee.
Al award Miss D with a nice hot cappuccino.
this is the sentence we changed.
Al gave Miss D coffee.
Al award Miss D with a nice hot cappuccino.
Hi, Xavier
ReplyDeleteI read your blog and I really liked it.I know that you used a picture from a movie.I have an idea you could use maybe you could use something like a love heart I noticed that you used it from a Pokemon movie.I enjoyed reading your blog I will ask for more information good bye and please check out my blog
Hello Xavier.
ReplyDeleteI find it more interesting reading stories that have strong sentences.They make you want to read on and give you a great picture in your head.Miss D is having LOTS of drinks...I hope she likes cappuccinos.
What drink do you like?.I like having hot chocolates from Bean Buzz.They are my favourite drink maker.