I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year's Summer Learning Journey team. I will be commenting on your amazing posts over the summer along with Mikey! It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog.
It's great to see what you would bring with you on a boat, I see a lot of yummy food! Would this food be good to eat all the time? Do you think your body would be OK if you lived on this food?
Great use of pictures Xavier! For your readers you could even write out all the food names so that it is really obvious!
You made it very interesting about your choices of food. 6 good foods and 4 bad foods. I saw your spelling is wrong, maybe next time you could check your spelling with a friend or adult. What is your favourite type of boat? Love Riley 💕❤♥👑
if i had to sell on a boat for three weeks this morning I would take
Hi Xavier!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year's Summer Learning Journey team. I will be commenting on your amazing posts over the summer along with Mikey! It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog.
It's great to see what you would bring with you on a boat, I see a lot of yummy food! Would this food be good to eat all the time? Do you think your body would be OK if you lived on this food?
Great use of pictures Xavier! For your readers you could even write out all the food names so that it is really obvious!
Keep up the great blogging work,
Gabe
Hi Xavier
ReplyDeleteYou made it very interesting about your choices of food. 6 good foods and 4 bad foods. I saw your spelling is wrong, maybe next time you could check your spelling with a friend or adult. What is your favourite type of boat?
Love Riley 💕❤♥👑