We are learning to make a strong narrative. It has to be believable consistent and descriptive and strong structure.
Yesterday,we were learning how to show not tell .We had to go on this app thesaurus and search up The week action words. And then it came out with the strong action words.
this is the sentence we changed.
Al gave Miss D coffee.
Al award Miss D with a nice hot cappuccino.
this is the sentence we changed.
Al gave Miss D coffee.
Al award Miss D with a nice hot cappuccino.


